Christmas CARDS?

6 Comments

1. lovebug2052 says:

   April 3, 2010 at 12:49 pm

   sound good to me
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2. No says:

   April 3, 2010 at 1:21 pm

   Greeting cards need to be much shorter and there needs to be a funny punchline…I understand the sentiment and it’s something we all can relate too which is great but if you leave it that way it’s just depressing…
   Like if you say:
   Had to visit all the relatives we usually avoid out of fear
   But at least we got leftovers to take home for the year!
   …it’s comiserating but there is a happy ending(sorta) LOL:)
   Hope that made sense…
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3. Angela B says:

   April 3, 2010 at 1:52 pm

   i like your peom
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4. Neerdowellian says:

   April 3, 2010 at 2:15 pm

   You won’t win a greeting card contest with such a downer of a poem. You need to have a more upbeat tone, it needs to be shorter, you need to lose some cynicism.
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5. Sicilian Siren says:

   April 3, 2010 at 2:44 pm

   I LOVE your poem as a poem, but as a Greeting Card, NO. It’s too long and much too negative, Definitely leave out the parts about the road rage and the crummy gifts. You say the contest is for a Greeting Card. Are we talking about Alternative Greeting cards for Christmas. As I said, I truly think the poem is wonderful. I just think you are trying to put it in the wrong venue.
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6. iheartedwardcullen says:

   April 3, 2010 at 2:53 pm

   well im definitly in the post xmas mood know-um thanx alot? and xmas cards are spouseda make ppl happy?!?!?!?!?
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